The Big Man
Elizabeth Maher's world-building series continues, reimagining American folklore from a protocolized perspective
The whole business was a first-rate falsehood, constructed out of nothing but thin air and the desperate gullibility of men who require a master. Janice Spurlock felt a sharp, unwelcome pang of shame that these rough-hewn characters had swallowed the story whole, but she suppressed it. Sentiment is a poor tool for management.
She had been an only child, and a serious one. Her mother had not survived her birth, and her father, who had built the Concord Lumber Company out of a single team of oxen and a willingness to misrepresent his timber rights, had not known what to do with a daughter who preferred ledgers to embroidery. By the time she was 12, he had given up trying to change her and simply let her sit in on the books, where she remained, a small, observant fixture of the office.
By 14 she had identified an error in the company’s method of estimating board footage that had been costing her father something on the order of 200 dollars a season. She corrected the formula in the margin of the relevant ledger in a small, clean hand that looked like a row of disciplined ants. Her father, when it was pointed out to him three months later, regarded the correction for some time with his jaw working, and finally remarked that he supposed the girl could keep doing that sort of thing if she wished, provided she didn’t get a swollen head about it.
She did wish. By 18 she had drafted a complete reorganization of the camp’s bunkhouse rotations which would have reduced fistfights by approximately a third, while potentially increasing the morning cut an estimated 11 percent by brewing the coffee stronger.
But she did not share these ideas with anyone. She filed them in the bottom drawer of her father’s desk, in a cardboard folder marked PROPOSED. There it joined a growing accumulation of similar documents – a rotation schedule for the saw blades, calibrated to extend the working life of each by 17 percent; a method for the management of the kitchen accounts that would, by her estimate, have eliminated the theft of bacon to within two pounds a month; a proposal for the resurfacing of the skid roads in a cheaper gravel mix that would have carried a fully laden timber sled at a saving of four cents a yard; and a standardization of the noon meal that would have reduced the cost per man by nine percent while shortening the meal break by six minutes. None of these had ever been read by another soul.
The folder grew thick. By the time her father died, suddenly, of a congestion of the lungs, the folder was four inches deep and bound with twine, and Janice had been managing in her head, for some years, an entire alternative Concord that ran in parallel to the actual Concord and was, in every measurable respect, a superior operation.
She had been in charge of the company’s accounts for nine years when he died, its correspondence for six, and its contracts for four. The men in the camp did not know any of this. They knew her as the small, neat woman who occasionally appeared in town at her father’s elbow, wearing a sensible hat and holding her ledger book like a weapon of war. The men believed they had been working for the old man up to the morning of his death, when in fact they had been working for his daughter for the better part of a decade. She had run it exactly as he had. Janice had found that the only way to be obeyed by such men was to be ignored by them.
When her father passed and left the Concord Lumber Company to her, she was faced with a hard mathematical truth. The camp at the Concord was populated by the sort of bearded, unwashed specimens who would no more take orders from a solitary woman than they would from a chickadee. Had she attempted to command them directly, there would have been a general uprising and likely a fire. She retired to her father’s office, a room dominated by a desk so vast it seemed to have been hewn from the stump of a world-founding cedar, and there she drafted her Great Deception.
On the Selection of a Suitable Fiction
She did not arrive at the Big Man immediately. She wrote the candidates out on a sheet of foolscap, with columns for Plausibility, Durability, Authority, and Risk of Contradiction. She was a woman who believed in the power of the written word to anchor a lie, but she also knew the lie had to withstand the brutal scrutiny of the logging camp.
A brother: has an address, and an address can be reached; a fiction one can call on is an easy target for a disgruntled logger with a shotgun. Struck through. A trust managed by lawyers: the loggers would mark a lawyer at a hundred yards and stop working out of spite. Struck through. A missionary uncle in the southern isles was elegant, but the loggers were not, in their bones, a churchly population. She didn’t need a sermon; she needed a saw-cut. Struck through.
An invalid heir confined to a mountain sanatorium was nearly the winner. It offered an excuse for his absence. But an invalid commands sympathy, not obedience, and the men of the Concord did not bend their backs out of sympathy for any creature whatever. They required a master who could, in theory, break them in half.
She had been considering and discarding for the better part of a week when she found herself looking at the framed photograph of her father on the wall behind the desk. He had been a man of quite ordinary proportions in life – five feet eight inches in his Sunday boots – but in the photograph, taken from below by an itinerant who did not understand lenses, he loomed. Shoulders filled the frame. Head touched the upper border. And Janice, who knew exactly what kind of man her father had actually been, and how the loggers had nonetheless feared him, understood at once what kind of figure she required.
By the end of the afternoon she had conjured a man. He was a giant. He had been raised on the high plains. He had once excavated a lake with a hand-shovel to settle a wager with himself. He had taught himself a working knowledge of higher mathematics from a damaged volume he had found in a creek bed. He shunned the company of lesser men because his very dimensions made the chairs of polite society unequal to the task of seating him, and he could not abide a chair that creaked. He would communicate with the world through Janice, his devoted secretary, whom he had selected for the position on the strength of her late father’s recommendation and her own demonstrated discretion.
On the Announcement
Janice did not announce the inheritance herself. She had her late father’s attorney ride out to the camp on a Saturday morning with the document in a leather case, and she watched from the office window as he assembled the men in the yard and read the relevant clauses aloud in his thin, precise voice.
The clauses, which she had drafted in the language of binding arbitration, established that the late Mr. Spurlock had encountered in the high country a man of singular prowess and stature, known only as the Big Man. This man had revealed proprietary methods of forestry and had been left the company in its entirety, on the condition that production quotas were met. He would continue to live in the deep timber, and all communications, payrolls, and directives would pass strictly through Miss Janice Spurlock.
The attorney had read the clauses through twice on the previous day. He had looked up at Janice, standing in the doorway of the office, with the expression of a man preparing to ask a dangerous question. Janice had named a figure. The attorney had closed his mouth, accepted the check, and ridden out the following Saturday with no further reference to the document’s particulars, which he had elected, on professional grounds, to entirely forget.
That afternoon Janice received the foreman in her father’s office for the first time. Six weeks earlier she had commissioned a portrait from a panoramic scenery painter. She had told him only that the subject was a logger and a man of unusual stature and stern disposition. He had delivered a canvas so imposing that Janice had been startled when it was unwrapped.
It hung now behind the great desk in a heavy black moulding she had ordered for the purpose. She had laid out, on the desk itself, a number of papers in the Big Man’s hand – written the previous evening by Janice in a deliberately large, heavy, and angular script she had developed over several drafts. Beside the papers sat a half-empty cup of cold coffee, a pipe of unusual size she had purchased in town from a novelty shop, and a pair of leather gloves, the largest stocked by the general store. She had even rubbed them with dirt and axle grease to simulate use.
“Where is he?” the foreman asked, his eyes drifting immediately past Janice to the massive portrait.
“He has gone back up to the high camp,” Janice said, her voice even. “He left this morning.”
The foreman looked at the cup on the desk. “Coffee’s gone cold,” he noted.
“He drinks it cold by preference,” Janice said. It was a detail she had not prepared, but the logic felt sound, and she committed it immediately to a mental file for future use.
The foreman looked at the grease-stained gloves. “He’s a big one,” he said quietly.
“Yes,” said Janice.
The foreman took his daily instructions – which included a 50-cent pay bump tied to an aggressive new footage quota – and left.
By the following morning every man in the camp had heard about the enormous pipe, the massive gloves, and the cooling cup of coffee. Within the week, a logger was claiming that he had seen an enormous figure moving along the ridgeline above the upper cut, and that the figure had paused and looked down at the camp for some moments before continuing on its way.
Janice sat at her desk and made a note in her ledger. The fiction had begun to generate its own evidence, which is the hallmark of a truly successful lie.
On the Mythmaking
Janice did not, after that first morning, leave the maintenance of the Big Man’s story to chance. She had observed how quickly the account of the mysterious figure on the ridgeline had moved through the camp.
The Big Man, she saw, would be sustained not by what she said but by what the men were given to say to each other about him. Janice would write and deliver dispatches from the Big Man. These were the seeds. The men and their gossip were the field. Anything she wanted the camp to know had to be planted in such a way that the men would carry it to one another in their own voices, and in their own time.
Over time the Big Man came to life. He had habits, opinions, a history, and a way of pronouncing certain words that the men recognized when it was imitated. A point in the legend, once it had passed through enough men, was held to be true by all of them. Each man held a piece.
When she wanted to get something across by way of the Big Man, Janice seeded it. In the summer she had decided the difficult ridge above the upper cut would have to come down before the next thaw – a job the men had been avoiding for two seasons on the reasonable grounds that it would kill someone. She seeded the project and waited.
A length of rope, knotted in a manner no one in the camp could reproduce, appeared coiled on the porch of the office one morning, with high-country pine needles caught in it. A massive, worn leather glove, missing its mate, was found in the high meadow by a boy gathering kindling, and brought to the foreman with great ceremony. A line of verse, scratched into the side of the cookshack in the Big Man’s hand, was discovered by a man crouching to retrieve a dropped spoon:
The pine on the ridge will not see spring. What man of skill will let it fall to weather?
The men did not require a fourth clue. By the end of the week the foreman had more volunteers for the difficult ridge than he knew what to do with. The thaw came the following spring to a cut basin that had already been cleared.
By the seventh year the camp was the Big Man, and the Big Man was the camp, and he was held – fully alive, in 500 copies – in the heads of the men who worked under him.
On the Management of Distributed Authority
The idea of the Big Man was, on balance, effective. It was also, Janice recognized with a certain intellectual discomfort, dangerous.
Its danger did not lie in exposure. That risk had diminished with each passing season. A new hand, arriving at the Concord, did not encounter a claim but a consensus. He learned about the Big Man the way he learned the layout of the camp or the proper way to sight a falling tree – through correction, through repetition, and through the mild contempt of older men for any deviation from the canon.
The danger lay elsewhere. It lay in the fact that the Big Man, having been distributed among so many minds, had begun to develop properties Janice had not intended.
At first these had been small things. A preference for a particular brand of tobacco she had never named. A story, told in three different bunkhouses, that the Big Man could not abide whistling after dark. A conviction, widely held, that he had once lifted the front end of a wagon to free a trapped ox. Janice had not seeded these stories, but they did no harm.
She made adjustments where necessary, pruning where she could and incorporating where it seemed advantageous. She did not discourage the belief that the Big Man disliked whistling after dark; the reduction in nocturnal noise had improved sleep, and the morning cut had benefited accordingly. She did, however, quietly eliminate a developing thread in which the Big Man was said to possess an aversion to wet boots, as it had begun to produce a reluctance to work in the rain.
For a time this management sufficed. The Big Man grew, but he grew along lines she could still perceive and, to some extent, guide.
The first true deviation occurred in the ninth year. It began with a refusal.
The matter itself was minor. Janice had issued, through the usual channels, a directive that the lower skid road – long neglected and, in her estimation, a source of measurable inefficiency – was to be resurfaced with the gravel mix she had specified some years earlier. The materials had been ordered. The schedule had been drawn. The men had been assigned.
On the morning the work was to begin, the foreman came to her office with his hat in his hands and a look on his face she had not seen before.
“They won’t do it,” he said.
Janice looked up from her desk. “They will do it. It is in the dispatch.”
“It’s in the dispatch,” he agreed. “But they say it don’t sound like him.”
Janice set down her pen.
“Explain.”
“It’s the gravel,” he said. “They say the Big Man wouldn’t have us lay down that kind of mix. They say it’s a weak man’s road.”
Janice felt not the sharp pang of shame she had experienced at the outset, but something colder and more precise. A misalignment. A discrepancy between model and outcome.
“The Big Man,” she said evenly, “is concerned with output.”
“Yes, ma’am. But they say he’s concerned with the right kind of output. They say he’d rather lose a day than lay down something that won’t hold in a hard thaw.”
Janice had, in fact, calculated the mix to hold in a hard thaw. She had included a margin of safety that exceeded the current standard by eight percent. She had also included a note, in the margin of her proposal, indicating that the perception of durability was as important as durability itself in maintaining compliance among the men.
She had not, until this moment, considered that the perception might be governed by a source other than herself.
“They are mistaken,” she said.
“Yes, ma’am.” He did not move.
“Then you will correct them.”
He looked at his hands. “I told them what was in the dispatch. I told them what you said he said. But they told me what he would say, and they wouldn’t be moved off it.”
Janice regarded him. He was a competent man, and he had for years executed her directives with a reliability that approached the mechanical. He was not, she judged, attempting to defy her. He was reporting a condition.
“What, precisely, did they tell you the Big Man would say about the road?”
The foreman shifted, as if recalling a line. “They reckon he’d say a road’s a promise. And a promise that’s cheap ain’t worth the trouble of making. They said he’d tell us to take the better gravel, even if it meant hauling it twice the distance. They said he’d say a man who builds for the thaw is building for the spring, and a man who builds for the spring is building for the year.”
Janice listened.
She had not written those words.
They were, she recognized at once, better than anything she would have written. They contained, in compact form, the principle she had attempted to encode in her specification, but they did so in a language that would not merely be obeyed but remembered. They would travel. They would attach themselves to the Big Man and become, in short order, inseparable from him.
She experienced, very briefly, a sensation she might have described – had she been inclined to describe such things – as admiration.
Then she experienced something else.
“Who said this?”
The foreman hesitated. “Jensen. From the lower bunk.”
“Send him to me.”
When the foreman had gone, Janice remained at her desk for some minutes with her hands folded on the blotter, thinking.
The problem, as she now understood it, was not that the men had begun to elaborate the Big Man. That had been anticipated and, within limits, encouraged. The problem was that the Big Man had begun to generate prescriptions – decisions about the conduct of the company – that did not originate with her.
This was, in a narrow sense, intolerable. It was also, in a broader sense, the logical conclusion of the system she had built. She had distributed the Big Man’s authority across many minds. She had encouraged identification. She had constructed, with great care, a figure whose judgment the men trusted more than their own. It was not, in retrospect, surprising that they had begun to exercise that judgment in his name.
The question was whether this development could be incorporated or whether it must be suppressed.
A knock at the door.
Jensen entered. He was a broad man with a beard that appeared to have been cut with a dull instrument and a manner that suggested he had not often been summoned to an office for purposes that did not involve discipline.
“You sent for me, Miss Spurlock.”
“I did. Sit.”
He sat. The portrait of the Big Man hung behind her on the wall, looking past Jensen toward the far corner of the room.
“You have been speaking for the Big Man,” Janice said.
“I wouldn’t say …”
“You would not say it. But you have done it. You told the foreman what the Big Man would say about the road.”
Jensen looked at his hands. “It seemed like what he’d say.”
“It did. You have a sense for him.”
Jensen did not respond.
“The words you used were effective. A road is a promise. A promise that’s cheap is not worth the trouble of making. A man who builds for the thaw is building for the spring, and a man who builds for the spring is building for the year. Did you compose that?”
He hesitated. “It just – came.”
Janice nodded. “You understand, I take it, that the dispatches are written in this office. By me.”
Jensen’s face did not change. This, she noted, was not the revelation she had imagined it might be.
“I know that,” he said.
She paused.
“You know that.”
He shrugged, slightly. “He don’t come down. Never has. It’s always been you, reading it out or sending it along.”
“And yet you have opinions about what he would say.”
“Yes, ma’am.”
“On what basis?”
He considered. “On account of what he’s said before. And on account of what kind of man he is.”
“And what kind of man is he?”
Jensen looked up, meeting her eyes for the first time. “He’s the kind that makes a place hold together.”
Janice was silent.
She had, in her bottom drawer, underneath the thick folder marked PROJECTS, a document titled On Cohesion and Throughput in Mixed-Skill Crews. It argued, in dense and careful prose, that men who believed their work was building something whole and lasting would work harder, fight less, and produce more. The document went further, in its closing pages, than its title would have suggested. It proposed that the same principles, applied beyond the timber cut, might in time produce not merely a workforce but a settlement – a whole valley run as a single enterprise, in which the men’s work and their lives followed the same design. It had not, to her knowledge, been read by another soul.
Jensen had, in one sentence, articulated its conclusion.
“You are dismissed,” she said. “Send the foreman in.”
When the foreman returned, Janice had already made her decision.
“You will tell the men the Big Man has considered the matter of the road. You will tell them he prefers the stronger mix, to be hauled from the upper quarry. You will also tell them that he expects the additional hauling to be offset by a reduction in waste at the saw, to be achieved through the rotation schedule he has previously outlined.”
“Yes, ma’am.”
“And you will tell them he was pleased to see they had not forgotten that a road is a promise.”
The foreman blinked. “Yes, ma’am.” He hesitated. “Ma’am? Did he say that?”
Janice regarded him for a moment.
“He did,” she said.
The foreman nodded, satisfied, and left.
Janice opened the bottom drawer of the desk and took out the folder marked PROPOSED. She untied the twine and added a new document to the top – not a plan for a specific improvement, but a short memorandum, written in her small, clean hand.
On the Management of Distributed Authority.
She paused, pen above the page, and added a line beneath the title.
The master, once invented, must be allowed to learn.
She closed the folder.
Outside, in the yard, a man began to whistle, and then, catching himself, stopped.
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